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Mockfight by AltairSky Mockfight by AltairSky
ohhh my new desktop wallpaper.
But the real question is: is this really mockfight?

to ProjectComment : if you tell me again that the pose looks awkward or to follow the S rule, please do me a redline. These are robots and they don't have a flexible spinal chord. Human torso anatomy DOES NOT WORK. Their torso is as flexible as your cellphone. If you want to critique the pose, it's okay, but I want to see a redline. Don't post me references of humans, these characters are not humans and should NEVER be compared to humans in regards of motion range and posing.

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Cover Suzumega Medabot Special by AltairSky
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:iconchelano:
chelano Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Great battle scene.  Nice detail.  Intense
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much!
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:iconchelano:
chelano Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
welcome
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Plant--Mom Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Hi! I'm Lola with ProjectComment I actually really like the posing of these characters. As you've mentioned in your description, the posing is very unlike humans and I find it dynamic and visually pleasing. I am unaware of the way that these robots move, but to me it looks very normal. The characters are exquisitely detailed, with their robotic parts, and the weapons are very creative (I think they’re coming out of their hands?). The colors are also very well done, with the clear contrast between the blue-eyed character and the red-eyed character. The background, while really simple, actually brings attention to the characters. However, maybe you could add some shadows of objects in the background? I don’t know, it might make the scene seem more grounded in reality, although if that’s not what you’re aiming for it looks great. The real only critique I have is the metal's shading is a little patchy, It looks more like there are little bubbles on the armor. Maybe if you blended it more? However, it does fit the shading and lighting, which lends to the dark and foreboding feeling of this piece. The shading of the eyes also seems that there should glowing. As you said, 'is it really a mock fight?’

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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much for the suggestions!
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:iconplant--mom:
Plant--Mom Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
No prob  :) I am by no means an expert but I try lol
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J-Cody Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017   Traditional Artist
Hello! I'm Jessica from ProjectComment to critique your work. You mentioned in the artist comments the pose might be considered awkward because of robot anatomy rather than human anatomy. I really don't see anything that would be considered awkward for the pose above for both subjects. While robot anatomy differs with some being more flexible than others, being flexible to some extent between the hips and torso is generally acceptable.

You've captured a great dynamic scene not only in pose, but also in color. Although I do appreciate a limited palette, it can cause a lack of depth in a drawing or painting. Adding subtle hints of other colors for shading can give the overall color scheme more realistic tones and tints. The background reminds me of cloud structures but looks a bit too uniformed. Although the focus is on the main subjects, I think if you added more contrast and colors to the background, you could improve the over all quality and atmosphere of this piece.

For the shading of the characters, it looks a bit dull in a metal finish. That's fine if that is how its designed, but I though since these characters were fighting that a few blemishes of scratches and scruffs to the metal would only aid in bringing a sense of realism to this painting.

I hoped that this has helped in some way. I hope to see more of your work soon. :)
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much! That's definitely helpful!
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:icongoofybandit:
GoofyBandit Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa... This is really freaking good. I  mean, where do I even start??
The lighting is so good. Like, official artist for something good! Have you ever thought of going professional or something? Because you have such an amazing talent, chills get sent down my spine just looking at this! Yes, I really love good talent, and you, my friend, are the pure definition of talent! I even think I'll fav spam you and give you a watch! Keep it up! 
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww thank you so much! But my art is so far from being professional, I can't even sell commissions!
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:icongoofybandit:
GoofyBandit Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Non-sense! I bet you could.
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:iconifdeathhadacat:
IfDeathhadaCat Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just going through all your stuff now and damn, so many awesome pieces! I adore this one! The dramatic colouring, the movement and Altairs pose are just so damn awesome!
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww thank you so much! I really had fun with the light and I love altair's pose though some people told me it looks awkward but yet they failed to explain how I'm supposed to improve it so I'll just ignore those critiques.
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:icontinseii:
Tinseii Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2017
I really love the scene that this piece paints even without a lot of words being said here.  The use of red is also very beautifully done.
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Bigsleeves-Arts Featured By Owner Edited Jun 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Hey there! I'm here from ProjectComment!
I really like this! There is so much drama and movement! The poses are well done (considering the way their torsos move) and the idea you had was executed well! 
One thing I'd like to comment on is that the direction of the viewer's eye here is a bit strange. I don't know if I should be following the curve of that red light or look at the blue eye of the other robot and then at the curve. There isn't enough contrast between the robots and the background so they kinda blend in a bit and become hard to see. Darker darks and lighter lights could've done the trick to bring the robots out just a little bit more. 
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you for the advice!
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DazzlingSunset Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Here from Project Comment, I think the pose does work pretty well, I would try to critique it but it's pretty hard to make out the structure of the robots and exactly what is going on with the poses, which could be working to the piece's benefit. Moving right along, the peice is very cohesive, the lighting, colors, and placement work rather well to make a cohesive picture. To nitpick at the execution of those elements a little bit, I think the piece may have worked better if the action was a little tight with the characters overlapping each other at least a little and the lighting was overall good but it seemed arbitrary in some places like on the wings of the figure on the right. It looks good overall but there is still work to be done!
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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:iconfae-oaksdaughter:
Fae-Oaksdaughter Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
What do you mean by "redline"?
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconfae-oaksdaughter:
Fae-Oaksdaughter Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
*lightbulb blinks on* Ahhh...!  Muchas gracias!  2015 NaNoEmo - #28 Cutie Idea 
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:iconblitzinfinite:
blitzinfinite Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2017  Student Filmographer
Feels so grim I love it 💪🏾 keep it up
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! I had fun with the ligting and My OC Altair is made out of grim, XD
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blitzinfinite Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Student Filmographer
Plot twist :O
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:icon02aya:
02Aya Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
WHOA! This is REALLY cool! I love the composition of this!
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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:iconmanchinesandmonsters:
ManchinesAndMonsters Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Epic by ManchinesAndMonsters  
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:iconhronawmonstamer:
HronawmonsTamer Featured By Owner May 30, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice to see some badass casual fighting! I love the red glow!
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I had a lot of fun with the redness!
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:icondarknight1138:
Darknight1138 Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job! I like the color choice too, very dark with a hit of vibrant red.
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thanks!
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:iconzoologykam:
ZoologyKaM Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Next Chapter: Altair's 10 Days of Darkness. STAY TUNED!
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL!! That would be sick.
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:iconarchangel537:
Archangel537 Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
KILL EACHOTHER FOR MY AMUSEMENT
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:iconmoonmute:
moonmute Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh~ Great work with the lighting here :)
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thanks! I had a lot of fun!
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:iconbadrater:
Badrater Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
Whoa..... What's happening here?
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:iconjh-mokuren:
JH-MoKuReN Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist
This is the definition of pure epicness! Bow to the almighty Altair~
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yep!
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:icondysfunkduk:
DysfunkDuk Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Killer posing =}
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thankies! I enjoy a lot fight scenes!
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:icondysfunkduk:
DysfunkDuk Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Same, live action and animated. Have you seen the film kingsmen? HIGHLY recommend it if you love fast paced badass action packed awesomeness.
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Seems interesting, I'll check it out!
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:iconnoah199:
Noah199 Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
This. Is. Epic.
also this COULD be a sneaky preview for a new chapter
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pure epicness!
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H3K4T0N Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
splendid..!
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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PredalienMaster Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic awesome!!! :la:
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:iconaltairsky:
AltairSky Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
verily!
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